13:01:57 From Mike Strauss to Everyone: Figures...a USC guy... 13:04:27 From Julie E. Claussen to Everyone: Yes - Fish people do rock… 13:04:38 From devo brown to Everyone: Reacted to "Yes - Fish people do..." with πŸ‘πŸΌ 13:06:01 From Matthew David to Everyone: Here's the latest edition of the Writer's Journey: https://www.amazon.com/Writers-Journey-Anniversary-Mythic-Structure/dp/1615933158/ 13:10:30 From devo brown to Everyone: πŸ”§ 13:19:06 From Rebecca Thomas to Everyone: wow. What a title! 13:19:07 From Matthew David to Everyone: Pay attention to what Randy is about to do here with analyzing this abstract - I'll be asking you all to do it later! 13:19:14 From Matthew David to Everyone: Reacted to "wow. What a title!" with πŸ˜‚ 13:19:41 From Albertha Alexander to Everyone: Say wha 13:20:00 From Jean Castillo to Everyone: Makes my head spin 13:20:07 From devo brown to Everyone: No prob, I get it 13:20:24 From Matthew David to Everyone: And heads up, I've posted the final week of NOAA Working Circles - you can sign up here: https://docs.google.com/spreadsheets/d/17ry5-PdWi2UjPUk_VAHZv9MtkMCc7Fuu0laltWsKcOU/edit#gid=0 13:21:14 From Matthew David to Everyone: Yup, how Randy is doing this is exactly what I want you to be doing later. 13:22:31 From Matthew David to Everyone: Pro tip for abstracts: If it happened in the past, it's probably Agreement. 13:25:13 From Jean Castillo to Everyone: Where do you get this ? 13:25:36 From Jean Castillo to Everyone: Powerful 13:25:42 From Matthew David to Everyone: https://chat.openai.com/ 13:25:44 From Jean Castillo to Everyone: scary powerfull 13:26:05 From Matthew David to Everyone: It's like having an AI assistant. 13:26:22 From Julie E. Claussen to Everyone: Just used it earlier today to identify jargon 13:26:35 From Curt Whitmire to Everyone: I hope one of my abstracts isn't coming up to be ripped apart, although I would secretly be grateful 😬 13:28:03 From Randy Olson to Everyone: All the abstracts are from other disciplines (you’re safe) 13:29:06 From Curt Whitmire to Everyone: Reacted to "All the abstracts ..." with πŸ‘ 13:29:58 From Eli Holmes - NOAA Fisheries to Everyone: Can you post the scoring rubric again 13:31:17 From Matthew David to Everyone: http://abtframework.com/wp-content/uploads/2023/05/Abstracts_NOAA.pdf 13:40:27 From Eli Holmes - NOAA Fisheries to Everyone: 5 13:40:29 From Jen Walsh to Everyone: 1 13:40:30 From Jean Castillo to Everyone: 3 13:40:31 From Elizabeth Phillips - NOAA to Everyone: 2 13:40:33 From Aimee Fullerton to Everyone: 2 13:40:34 From Tom Wadsworth to Everyone: 4 13:40:34 From Kinsey Frick to Everyone: 4 13:40:34 From Curt Whitmire to Everyone: 3 13:40:35 From Rebecca Thomas to Everyone: 2 13:40:35 From Lynn Massey to Everyone: 3 13:40:37 From Jeff Atkins to Everyone: 5 13:40:41 From Julie E. Claussen to Everyone: 6 13:40:44 From Andrianna Jutt to Everyone: 6 13:41:23 From Blane Bellerud to Everyone: 3 13:41:51 From Mike Strauss to Everyone: Just the way you should do it! 13:42:39 From Jen Walsh to Everyone: You're so nice, Beth! 13:42:43 From Mike Strauss to Everyone: This is how a LOT of abstracts start...(We did this...) 13:44:12 From Jean Castillo to Everyone: I didn't understand the real problem 13:44:18 From Julie E. Claussen to Everyone: I love that term Matt - Narrative out in the wild πŸ™‚ 13:44:29 From Mike Strauss to Everyone: Lots of abstracts start telling you what they did and then tell you what they concluded...Start this one with the word THEREFORE...it then looks like a discussion you came into without any context. 13:44:29 From Elizabeth Phillips - NOAA to Everyone: Reacted to "You're so nice, Be..." with πŸ˜‚ 13:45:05 From Jen Walsh to Everyone: 7.5 13:45:05 From Elizabeth Phillips - NOAA to Everyone: 7 13:45:07 From Aimee Fullerton to Everyone: 6 13:45:07 From Blane Bellerud to Everyone: 7 13:45:08 From Curt Whitmire to Everyone: 6 13:45:09 From Rebecca Thomas to Everyone: 4 13:45:11 From Tom Wadsworth to Everyone: 5 13:45:12 From Kinsey Frick to Everyone: 6 13:45:13 From Lynn Massey to Everyone: 5 13:45:13 From Jeff Atkins to Everyone: 7 13:45:14 From Jean Castillo to Everyone: 5 13:45:14 From Eli Holmes - NOAA Fisheries to Everyone: 1 13:45:15 From Julie E. Claussen to Everyone: 8 13:45:23 From Andrianna Jutt to Everyone: 4 13:45:51 From Mike Strauss to Everyone: Don't get distracted by the content...look at the structure... 13:47:21 From Mike Strauss to Everyone: First sentence: Fact, Second sentence: another fact. Third Sentence, a problem. Fourth Sentence, what they did. 13:47:46 From Aimee Fullerton to Everyone: Most of the β€œso what” is at the end instead of up front 13:48:41 From Elizabeth Phillips - NOAA to Everyone: It adds some excitement to the abstract! 13:49:03 From Mike Strauss to Everyone: A factoid 13:49:06 From Curt Whitmire to Everyone: 4 13:49:06 From Elizabeth Phillips - NOAA to Everyone: 4 13:49:07 From Tom Wadsworth to Everyone: 4 13:49:08 From Aimee Fullerton to Everyone: 3 13:49:09 From Rebecca Thomas to Everyone: 7 13:49:11 From Kinsey Frick to Everyone: 4 13:49:11 From Blane Bellerud to Everyone: 6 13:49:12 From Lynn Massey to Everyone: 7 13:49:12 From Jen Walsh to Everyone: 6.5 13:49:12 From Eli Holmes - NOAA Fisheries to Everyone: 4 13:49:14 From Jean Castillo to Everyone: 5 13:49:15 From Jeff Atkins to Everyone: 5 13:49:18 From Julie E. Claussen to Everyone: 4 13:49:22 From Andrianna Jutt to Everyone: 7 13:50:39 From Mike Strauss to Everyone: I think if the problem were clear the reader would ask the question... 13:53:42 From Curt Whitmire to Everyone: 7 13:53:42 From Jen Walsh to Everyone: 8 13:53:43 From Tom Wadsworth to Everyone: 6 13:53:44 From Elizabeth Phillips - NOAA to Everyone: 8 13:53:44 From Rebecca Thomas to Everyone: 8 13:53:45 From Jean Castillo to Everyone: 8 13:53:45 From Aimee Fullerton to Everyone: 8 13:53:46 From Eli Holmes - NOAA Fisheries to Everyone: 7 13:53:47 From Blane Bellerud to Everyone: 8 13:53:50 From Kinsey Frick to Everyone: 9 13:53:50 From Lynn Massey to Everyone: 7 13:53:51 From Jeff Atkins to Everyone: 7 13:53:55 From Lisa Crozier to Everyone: 8 13:54:01 From Andrianna Jutt to Everyone: 4 13:54:49 From Rebecca Thomas to Everyone: Yeah, I couldn't figure out why I should care either 13:54:50 From Lisa Crozier to Everyone: it followed the PIXAR 7 sentence story structure, which feels different from ABT but still a compelling approach 13:55:19 From Eli Holmes - NOAA Fisheries to Everyone: I thought it sounded like a Hallmark movie summary. 13:55:35 From Andrianna Jutt to Everyone: Eli - agreed 13:55:51 From Rebecca Thomas to Everyone: Reacted to "I thought it sound..." with πŸ‘ 13:56:00 From Mike Strauss to Everyone: This is a movie logline, which is different from an abstract. The goal here is to get you to watch the movie...not tell you the whole movie. 13:56:09 From Curt Whitmire to Everyone: Sorry, Zoom rarely plays nice with my headphones 13:56:40 From Curt Whitmire to Everyone: I thought this was a good example of a cABT 13:57:09 From Mike Strauss to Everyone: Curt...it's more that than a full abstract... 13:57:19 From Blane Bellerud to Everyone: comedy or drama? or horror? do we know everything George was taking care of 13:57:24 From Aimee Fullerton to Everyone: 1 13:57:25 From Kinsey Frick to Everyone: 1 13:57:25 From Jen Walsh to Everyone: 2 13:57:26 From Rebecca Thomas to Everyone: 3 13:57:26 From Elizabeth Phillips - NOAA to Everyone: 5 13:57:28 From Lynn Massey to Everyone: 3 13:57:28 From Tom Wadsworth to Everyone: 2 13:57:28 From Eli Holmes - NOAA Fisheries to Everyone: 2 13:57:30 From Blane Bellerud to Everyone: 2 13:57:33 From Curt Whitmire to Everyone: 1 13:57:33 From Jeff Atkins to Everyone: 4 13:57:35 From Mike Strauss to Everyone: 11 13:57:36 From Julie E. Claussen to Everyone: 2 13:57:36 From Andrianna Jutt to Everyone: 3 13:57:40 From Lisa Crozier to Everyone: 2 13:57:59 From Aimee Fullerton to Everyone: And and and 13:58:07 From Jean Castillo to Everyone: 1 I agree it is all over the place 13:58:11 From Jen Walsh to Everyone: Reacted to "1 I agree it is al..." with πŸ‘ 13:58:20 From Jen Walsh to Everyone: Reacted to "And and and" with πŸ‘ 13:58:35 From Blane Bellerud to Everyone: could be a log line for a wes anderson movie 13:58:39 From Mike Strauss to Everyone: None of these people worked in a convenience store in the 90s. 13:58:52 From Tom Wadsworth to Everyone: Clerks? 13:59:03 From Curt Whitmire to Everyone: Tom beat me to it 13:59:30 From Elizabeth Phillips - NOAA to Everyone: slacker = 50%, right?! 14:00:10 From Blane Bellerud to Everyone: Dante loves his life but he feels like he should be doing more therefore he has to make a decision 14:00:17 From Brian Cluer to Everyone: now I need to look up "slacker" 14:00:21 From Elizabeth Phillips - NOAA to Everyone: Reacted to "Clerks?" with πŸ‘ 14:00:33 From Curt Whitmire to Everyone: Or just nod in the case of Silent Bob 14:00:40 From Elizabeth Phillips - NOAA to Everyone: Reacted to "Or just nod in the..." with πŸ˜‚ 14:00:41 From Julie E. Claussen to Everyone: Feel better Matt! 14:00:41 From Jean Castillo to Everyone: Take care! 14:00:42 From Andrianna Jutt to Everyone: Thanks all 14:00:45 From Jean Castillo to Everyone: Bye 14:00:50 From Albertha Alexander to Everyone: Bye bye