Science Communication
Contents
Session 1 Resources – Class Goals and Expectations
Session 2 Resources – Hero’s Journey
Session 3 Resources – Singular Narrative
Session 4 Resources – Inner & Outer Circle
Session 5 Resources – Importance of Listening
Session 6 Resources – Oral Presentations – Meetings, talks, seminars
Session 7 Resources – Writing Winning Proposals
Session 8 Resources – How to Be a Good Reviewer
Session 9 Resources – Topics Not Covered!
Time: Wednesdays 11:00 AM – 1:00 PM Eastern Time
Course Meeting Dates
8/31, 9/14, 9/21, 10/12, 10/19, 10/26, 11/2, 11/16, 11/30
Session 1 Resources – Class Goals & Expectations
The AAAS ABT Framework Video:
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Additional Information:
- Uri Hassonâs Paper on Neurocinematics â For a look at how narrative and non-narrative effects the brain. This paper was referenced in the AAAS video.
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Randy Olson’s books can be found here. The original Narrative Gym will be required reading for this course.
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Clear and effective communication without obfuscation
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Background – Optional reading and watching before class 2:
- Randy’s seminar with Scripps Research, “The Biomedical Maelstrom:Â Narrative Mechanics of Failed COVID Communication from CDC and Elsewhere.” Listen on your own time:
- Risk Communication on Climate: Mental Models and Mass Balance â The IPCC Report on climate change is supposed to be simple enough for policy makers to interpret it, but itâs so complicated that even MIT grads with STEM backgrounds canât decipher it.
- Medical Obfuscation: Structure and Function â Michael Crichtonâs paper on how medical communication does NOT have to be as complicated as it is.
- UN climate reports are increasingly unreadable â A Nature article on how UN climate reports fail the Flesch Reading Ease test.
- Hegelian dialectic â The 3 forces of narrative, Agreement, Contradiction, and Consequence, arenât a new idea. You can find the roots back in the 1600s with Thesis, Antithesis, and Synthesis.
- âHistoric Botched Jobâ: The Narrative Mechanics of Failed COVID Communication From CDC and Elsewhere â A recent Medscape podcast that Randy was on discussing the failures of COVID communication. Â
Session 2 Resources – Hero’s Journey
Matthew Winkler Video: What makes a hero:
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Kurt Vonnegut on the Shapes of Stories:
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Narrative Blitz – You Gotta Tell Your OWN Story! – Dr. Shirley Malcom:
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Narrative Blitz – The Three Forces of Narrative – Brian Palermo:
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Narrative Blitz – The Dunning-Kruger Curve – Michael Barthelmes:
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How to structure your – paper, proposal, presentation – It is all the same!
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Read before class and we will go over in class:
- Three Forms of the ABT â Itâs recommended you read this excerpt from Houston, We Have a Narrative and get an understanding of the cABT (Conversational ABT).
- The ABT Tools Cheat Sheet â Keep this with you throughout the class. It’s a summary of all the tools we will go over. Check off when you understand each of these as we go along. We can circle back to any of them if you feel confused.
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Exercise #1: The 5 Word Problem
Come to class prepared to share this ABT.
Send to Dianna before class and then revise after class and send again!
âWhatâs the problem?â is the most common question asked when building ABTs. For this exercise, try to finish this sentence âThe problem is _____â and use only 5 additional words.
Examples: The problem is bad resource management.
The problem is the old method doesnât work.
The problem is we have bad data.
Stripping down your problem to just 5 words can help you clarify what your narrative is actually all about and focus in on the real problem that you want to address.
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Habits of effective writers:
- Diannaâs guide to writing a scientific paper and getting it done.
- Writing and Reviewing Assignments
Session 3 Resources – Singular Narrative
The One Thing:
Narrative Blitz â The One Thing â Rick Nelson:
Narrative Blitz â The Narrative Christmas Tree â Dr. Keisha Bahr:
Narrative Blitz â Julie Claussen â The Dobzhansky Template:
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Download:Â The ABT 3 Step Model (aka the ABT Blue Card)
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Extra references that illustrate the importance of the Singular Narrative:
- Nicholas Kristofâs Advice for Saving the World â The importance of the singular narrative. Once you increase the size of a narrative from one person in need to two people in need, compassion drops in the audience.
- Compassion Fade: Affect and Charity Are Greatest for a Single Child in Need â The research article that âAdvice for Saving the Worldâ references.
- Former White House COVID Advisor: We Can All Safely Experience Joy This Holiday Season â Andy Slavitt episode of Medscape podcast where he and the host, Eric Topol, graded science communication during COVID as an F.
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Singular narrative does not mean always simple!
Required reading:
- âData-Drivenâ Campaigns Are Killing the Democratic Party â The article in which Dave Gold coined the term âChristmas Treeâ when looking for an overarching problem. Itâs okay to have several problems in your narrative, but you need to find the overarching Christmas Tree problem for your narrative that all the other problems can hang off of it like ornaments.
-  Oprahâs Golden Globes Speech â A great example of using Nested ABTs. Color coded in the ABT format.
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Exercise #2: Using the Dobzhansky Template to find your âOne Thing.â
Restructure your ABT in the form of a Dobzhansky Template to help you find your singular narrative. This is an excellent tool to use during Step 1 of the ABT Blue Card. Â
Send to Dianna before class and then revise after class and send again!
 Dobzhansky Template: Nothing in _______ makes sense, except in the light of ________.
Examples: Nothing in biology makes sense, except in the light of evolution.
Nothing in geology makes sense, except in the light of plate tectonics.
Nothing in the management of mule deer makes sense except in the light of correctly estimating abundance.
Nothing in the challenge of teaching human anatomy makes sense except in the light of time management.
Session 4 Resources – Inner & Outer Circle
Inner and outer circle – differences in what you can get away with:
Most papers, presentations, proposals must assume you are speaking to the outer circle.
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Narrative Blitz – The Two Audiences – Dr. Nancy Knowlton:
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Narrative Blitz – Obfuscation Nation – Mike Backes:
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Read:
- Are You Confused by Scientific Jargon? So Are Scientists â A New York Times article recommended by Dianna about how jargon clogs up scientific papers to the point that other scientists canât understand them. Remember: your Inner Circle is always smaller than you think it is.
- Chaos in the brickyard â A famous Science Magazine letter on scientists and their obsessions.
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Exercise #3: cABT â Starting from simplicity
What is the converstational cABT version of your ABT? Prepare your cABT ahead of time.
Send to Dianna before class and then revise after class and send again!
The cABT should have all specifics stripped off of it. Use nothing but generic words, like âthingâ and âstuff.â For example, if your ABT dealt with a new way to clean junk from the ocean thatâs an improvement and the old system is outdated, the cABT would be âWe had a thing we were using for a while, but itâs not working that great, so now we want to use a better thing.â
See? We canât tell that youâre working on cleaning the environment. You could just as well be telling me that youâre implementing a new accounting system at your bank for all we know. That makes it a good cABT.
This exercise is important in making sure you have an easily understood base narrative, that you really know what the narrative core of your ABT is all about. And then from the base cABT, you can start adding specifics again when constructing your kABT.
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Exercise #4 â âThis is a story ofâŠâ â Processes â Ultimate & Proximate
This is another exercise go over before class.
Send to Dianna before class and then revise after class and send again!
For this exercise, tell us what your ABT is about by finishing this sentence and using only 3 additional words âThis is a story of____.â
It seems simple, but this exercise is tricky because participants tend to focus on the subject. But stories need more than a subject, they need action. Processes are where you find that action. Common processes for ABTs could include adapting, managing, protecting, restoring, strategizing, educating.
Examples:
- Protecting a species
- Strategizing building restoration
- Managing conservation efforts
- Restoring wildlife
- Adapting to change
- Educating our stakeholders
Look at this example ABT:
Congressional funding is a key requirement for the continuation of important avian research, and we know that our research allows us to be better able to manage our wildlife habitats and protect endangered species. But program managers donât feel confident about securing future funding because some research areas are not receiving enough attention. Therefore, we need to effectively promote the proven success in these research areas to secure future funding.
When asked to complete the sentence âThis is a story of____,â a possibility is âThis is a story of avian research.â But this is just the subject and it doesnât tell us what action is taking place in this story.
Instead of the subject (avian research), focus on the process. If you wanted the process for the broader story, the Ultimate Goal, then the process might be âsecure,â since ultimately the purpose is to secure the future funds. âThis is a story of securing future funding.â
âSecuring future fundingâ is the Ultimate Goal, but you can take it down to a narrower level by focusing on the specific process, the Proximate Goal, you want to go through to get that future funding: âThis is a story of promoting our successes.âÂ
Ultimate Goal:Â Securing future funding.
Proximate Goal:Â Promoting our successes.
Fulfilling the Proximate Goal will lead us to succeeding at the Ultimate Goal.
Try to fill in âThis is a story of____â for your ABT using only 3 additional words (focusing on the process) or less. Do one version for the Ultimate Goal and one version for the Proximate Goal.
Session 5 Resources – Importance of Listening – Adapted from Brian Palermo
Brian Palermoâs Resources â Brian offers a number of resource videos on his website, some with interactive exercises built in. Topics include listening, utilizing emotional intelligence, and audience focused communication. He also offers online improv training to help improve listening and communication skills.
Narrative Blitz – The IF/THEN CLAUSE – Dr. Marissa Metz:
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Exercise #5 : IF/THEN â The tool of HOPE and FEAR
Send to Dianna before class and then revise after class and send again!
The IF/THEN tool is incredibly powerful at helping to set the stakes and getting very specific. You can use it in the Blue section and it can be a tool for Hope, showing what Heaven could look like it all goes according to plan. Or you can use it for Fear in the Red section, showing how bad Hell can be if everything falls apart.
But what should your IF/THEN be about? To answer that, go back to the optional exercise âThis is a story ofâŠâ â Processes â Ultimate & Proximate ââ and find your Ultimate and Proximate goals.
Letâs look at the example we used.
Congressional funding is a key requirement for the continuation of important avian research, and we know that our research allows us to be better able to manage our wildlife habitats and protect endangered species. But program managers donât feel confident about securing future funding because some research areas are not receiving enough attention. Therefore, we need to effectively promote the proven success in these research areas to secure future funding.
For the example ABT, the goals were:
Ultimate: A story of securing future funding
Proximate: A story of promoting our success.
Now that you have the goals, try crafting them into IF/THEN statements, both positive and negative, and see if you find any variation that has some power. If it helps, you can put them into the form of questions like the ones below for you to answer:
- If you can secure future funding, then what happens? (Hope)
- If you do a good job at promoting our successes, then what happens? (Hope)
- If you canât secure future funding, then what happens? (Fear)
- If you fail to promote our successes, then what happens? (Fear)
Try asking questions like this for your own ABTâs Ultimate and Proximate Goals and see if you can properly set the stakes using the tool of Hope or Fear.
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Exercise 6 Exercise #6: Past, Present, & Future
Thereâs a few different variations of the kABT. Weâll be looking at one of them here, the Past-Present-Future ABT.
Send to Dianna before class and then revise after class and send again!
The Past-Present-Future format isnât applicable to all topics, but we can experiment and see if it is with yours. For your project, craft the AND in a way to tell the audience what was going on before in your project or your old method for addressing a problem. For the BUT, tell the audience the current problem with the old method of doing things. For the THEREFORE, let us know the solution that youâll be attempting to implement in the future.
The cABT for a Past-Present-Future ABT might look like: âWe were doing this one method for the longest time AND it worked well enough, BUT a new issue came up, THEREFORE now we have to fix it by doing a new thing.â
You could also attempt an IF/THEN in a Past-Present-Future ABT, for example: âWe were doing this one method for the longest time AND it worked well enough, BUT a new issue came up and IF we donât fix it THEN itâs going to get really bad, THEREFORE now we have to fix it by doing a new thing.â
Try filling in the details with your own project and make your own kABT using the Past-Present-Future ABT format.
Or fill in the details with facts about your life to make a Past-Present-Future ABT for introducing yourself at parties or networking events: âI was doing this one thing, BUT then a big issue came up, THEREFORE now Iâm focusing on this other thing.â
And you can break out the Past-Present-Future ABT if youâre ever put on the spot by your employer with a question on where youâre at with a project at work. cABT: âWell boss, we got all this stuff done and itâs working great, but now weâve got a new problem, so weâll be doing a bunch of steps to fix it.â Fill in the details to that cABT on the fly and your boss should be up to speed on what youâre up to.
Session 6 Resources – Oral Presentations – Meetings, Talks, Seminars
Remember:
- Developing the text for your oral presentations – is all the same stuff!
- Have a strong narrative – tell a good story!
- Write out your talk, and practice so you know it so well you do not need the written script.
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 How to avoid death By PowerPoint | David JP Phillips:
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Five Principles of PowerPoint Design from David J.P. Phillips (shorter takeaways of above video):
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Allan Pease â 4 BLS to give you the edge (~ 4min) – Click here to watch
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Allan Pease – Power in the palm of your hand ~ 5min:
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Lynne Franklin â TEDxNapperville:
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Narrative Blitz – The ABT Moment – Liz Foote:
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Narrative Blitz – Spoons Vs Shovels – Jayde Lovel:
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Narrative Blitz – A Dark and Stormy Night for Plastics – Pete Myers:
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Additional Reading: Â
- Tips for effective PowerPoints
- How Not To Give a Scientific Talk
- Tips for Delivering Effective Congressional Testimony
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Exercise #7: Expected Vs Observed â Leading us to the ideal world
Time to look at a different version of the kABT, the Expected Vs Observed ABT.
Send to Dianna before class and then revise after class and send again!
The Expected Vs Observed ABT isnât applicable to all topics, but we can experiment and see if it is with yours. For your project, paint a perfect world in the AND in which everything goes right, what you would Expect from your âideal world.â Aim for Heaven!
Unlike the Past-Present-Future ABT, this time youâre starting the AND out in the ideal, perfect future, not the past. A positive IF/THEN in the AND is often helpful here in really driving home what the stakes are if all goes according to plan.Â
Then for the BUT, tell us the problem that youâre Observing which is interfering with this perfect world you envisioned in the AND. Aim for Hell!
Finally, for the THEREFORE, tell us how youâll lead us out of the problem of the BUT and back to the ideal world of the AND.
(This is often a great ABT for people who work on climate change projects. Climate change has been such an ongoing problem that itâs a part of our past now, so instead of looking at the climate change ridden past, youâre looking at the ideal future where youâre actively solving the problems of climate change in the AND).
A typical Expected Vs Observed cABT: âWeâve got this great project AND IF everything goes to plan THEN weâll get all kinds of great benefits BUT right now itâs not working because of a problem THEREFORE we need to fix it by doing some stuff.â
Try filling in the details with your own project and make your own kABT using the Expected Vs Observed ABT format.
Session 7 Resources – Writing Winning Proposals
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Narrative Blitz – Proposals – Dr. Dianna Padilla:
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Additional Info:
- Advice on how women should pitch the âBUTâ â A reply by Dianna to a former studentâs question about the bias against women when they use the same strategies as men.
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Topics:
- What to know when submitting a grant
- How to choose a good place for your proposed work
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Read:
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 Exercise #8: We Know This â The proof is in the past
Time for another form of the kABT, the We Know This ABT. Once again, a We Know This ABT isnât right for every topic, but you can try and see if it is with yours.
A We Know This ABT is similar to a Past-Present-Future ABT, but this time instead of using the AND to look back at an old method that no longer works, weâre going to the past to look at a method We Know that works.
Set the AND at a place where youâve seen past ideal circumstances that are similar to our current circumstances. Weâre reaching back to the past for proof that weâre on the correct track, for evidence that this plan is the correct one.
The BUT typically involves whatâs preventing you from using this great plan thatâs always worked before.
The THEREFORE is your fix to get you back on track to your perfect tired-and-true plan.
cABT: âWE KNOW this process is important and IF we do it THEN weâve seen great benefits BUT we canât use it right now because of a problem THEREFORE we need to fix the problem by doing some things.â
Alternate cABT: âThereâs a thing thatâs important and WE KNOW IF we use this process on it THEN weâve seen great benefits BUT we canât use it right now because of a problem THEREFORE we need to fix the problem by doing some things.â
Fill in the details and see if you can make a We Know This ABT from your topic.
Session 8 Resources – How to Be a Good Reviewer of Manuscripts and Grant Proposals
Read:
When reviewing, be sure to go through each of the sections.
Topics:
- How to respond to Peer Review?
- Is the review of a grant different?
Session 9 Resources – Topics Not Covered!
Topics not covered that you want to hear about.
Make recommendations early!
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Additional Narrative Blitz Videos to watch when you have time – they are all great!
Narrative Blitz – “Reductive and Insulting!” – Park Howell:
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Narrative Blitz – A Fool’s Enterprise – Dr. Patricia Limerick:
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Narrative Blitz – Misinformation about Misinformation – Dr. Michael Strauss:
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Narrative Blitz – Cat Wars: The Value of Fiction – Dr. Kirsten Leong:
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Narrative Blitz – The Social Imperative (to developing narrative) – Dr. Jane Muncke:
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Narrative Blitz – Narrative Culture for the National Park Service – Cari Kreshak:
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